WHEREAS the quality of legislation in Talossa is admittedly low, with many errors and infelicities of language;
AND WHEREAS there is an even worse problem, whereby provisions enter into our Organic and statute law "by accident"', in that the Cosa and Senäts majority vote for the principle of a bill, trust its author, and don't actually read it properly, or assume that someone else will read it properly and point out any problems;
AND WHEREAS every legislator simply promising to be more conscientious is not a feasible response to this;
AND WHEREAS the following provision would probably work better than the previously mooted role of "legislative janitor";
BE IT ENACTED by the Ziu as follows:
A new section shall be inserted after H.6 of El Lexhatx, as follows, and the subsequent sections renumbered accordingly:
7.1 A Legislative Advisory Committee of Talossa (in Talossan, el Comità da Redacziun Legislatïu; and hereinafter, "the CRL") shall review or revise all legislative items from the Hopper as described in H.6 above; and may recommend acceptance or rejection, or suggest amendments in their best judgement.
7.2 The CRL shall conduct all its deliberations openly in the Hopper.
7.3 The CRL shall consist of the incumbent Mençéi, Túischac'h, and Avocat-Xheneral.
Ureu q'estadra så,
Dame Miestră Schivă (MC-FreeDems)