50RZ24 - THE LEGISLATION PROOFREADING BILL

Clarked in the 6th Clark (August 2017) of the 50th Ziu
Clark Entry ID: 700
Bill ID: 1230

WHEREAS the whole reason the Hopper system of tossing bills around before they were Clarked was enacted so as to catch any flaws or problems before the bill went to a vote;

AND WHEREAS a recent flurry of emergency PDs during the 50th Cosâ to amend basic problems in bills which have already passed the Ziu shows that this is not working;

AND WHEREAS royal assent clearly only functions as an additional check when the King feels inclined to do so, which seems extremely rare except when his powers and privileges are involved;

AND WHEREAS having the non-partisan Secretary of State in the Hopper discussions is a good thing we should make more use of:

AND WHEREAS the current law on how the SoS gate-keep bills for the Clark is screwy and incomprehensible:

BE IT ENACTED by the King, Senäts and Cosâ of Talossa in Ziu assembled that

1. El Lexhátx Section H.11, "Legislation", which currently reads:
11. The Secretary of State is empowered to refuse to put a certain bill on a Clark if said bill;

11.1. has the SLIGHTEST problem in excess of five (misspellings, inorganicity, etc.}, and/or

11.2. is not clearly typed or word-processed; and/or

11.3. is so substantially different from its original form as a legislative proposal that it constitutes a significantly different proposal.


shall be changed by the amendment of H.11.1 to read:
11.1. appears to him to be obviously on its face inorganic, or to have such grave errors as would make it ineffective and/or require further legislation or a Prime Dictate to make it effective.


2. The following final section shall also be added to H.11:
Any such decision shall be subject to judicial review.

Ureu q'estadra så,
Dame Miestră Schivă (MC-FreeDems)

Vote summary

Number: 50RZ24
Vote date: August 2017
Result: None (Cosă: 134-21-0, Senäts: 6-0-0)
Required for passage: Simple majority of both Houses

Voting record

MC Party Seats Vote
Dame Miestră Schivă FreeDems 13 Per
Viteu Marcianüs FreeDems 12 Per
Iason Taiwos FreeDems 12 Per
Chirbi Scherpa-Carriedo FreeDems 10
Alexandreu Soleiglhfred MRPT 13 Per
Sir Glüc da Dhi MRPT 13 Per
Martì Vataldestreça MRPT 13 Per
Erschéveþ da Schir MRPT 13 Per
Sir Ian Plätschisch MRPT 14 Per
Txoteu Davinescu MRPT 13 Per
Mximo Carbonel REP 10 Contră
Sir Cresti Siervicül RUMP 18 Per
Eovart Xhorxh RUMP 11 Contră
Danihel Txechescu RUMP 11
134-21-0
Senator Province Pr. Vote
Ián Anglatzarâ Cézembre CZ Per
Sir Gödafrïeu Válcadác'h Fiovă FV Per
Ma la Mha, Contă Thord Florenciă FL
Éovart Grischun Vuode VD Per
Dien Tresplet Maricopa MA Per
Sir Lüc da Schir Belacostă BE Per
Magniloqueu Épiqeu da Lhiun Maritiimi-Maxhestic MM Per
Sevastáin Pinátsch Atatürk AK
6-0-0
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